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someday, you, too

December 15, 2010
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head down, press forward.
someday, you, too.
don’t look, don’t notice.
hide it down, find your smile.
hold on, keep moving.
just for now, wait it out.
someday, you, too.

7 Comments leave one →
  1. Jingle permalink
    December 16, 2010 11:34 am

    love the motions.
    beautifully expressed emotions.

    you have got talent here, welcome to attend poets rally week 35, where you share your poetry and make new poetic friends…poetry awards are assigned upon completion.

    let me know when you are ready.
    Merry Christmas…
    keep writing…

  2. December 16, 2010 10:57 pm

    confusing emotions…liked the portrayal..

  3. December 17, 2010 6:19 am

    Enjoyed this short piece :)

  4. December 17, 2010 7:48 am

    I just went through 15 months of an ugly divorce. Boy, did your poem hit home for me. Nice.

  5. December 18, 2010 1:39 pm

    someday, you too :)

  6. December 18, 2010 3:38 pm

    hope to see your submission to poets rally soon,
    your talent deserves better attention..

    act, have fun!
    love your blog, your poetry is delicious to us.
    :)

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